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אשכול: App Fbi Leader

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    windead windead מנותק ג'וניור
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    App Fbi Leader

    ic:



    Personal Info :



    First + Last Name : Chris_Boldwine

    Date Of Birth : 1985

    Origin : Usa

    Phone Number : no have but i gonna buy

    Adress : Still No Address , With my frinds house.



    OOC:



    Personal Info :



    Name : Dor

    Age : 14

    Email : [email protected]

    Do I have a mic? : Yes



    Additional Info :



    Medical/scientific Expirience : Yes , Medical Experience.



    Nothing to say but good luck for others.



    Rp Test :



    MG - MetaGaming : Mixing the ooc chat with ic chat , Example ( hi Example_Example , Can you please tell me how can i pm? ).

    DM - DeathMatch : Killing everyone you possibly want by not using rp commands and just for fun , no exampls.

    PG - PowerGaming : Using Powers you coulden't use in the reality! ( Example : While being shot , not doing /crack and/or taking out a weapon and shooting and/or escaping with a vehicle/on foot).

    RK - RevengeKill : Returning to the place you died and killing the player thet killed you / Searching for the player thet killed you and killing him.



    My Life Story ~~~-~~~.Part 1 :A



    So there I am , an 28 years old grownup man with a good past and good studing at school and collage.

    I got my self a good job , good wife , good children , good life.

    But one day when I woke up to get ready to work I saw my wife missing.

    I didn't panic because sometimes she goes to shop early in the morning due long lines at noon's.

    I went to wake up the children for school and I saw they were gone.

    I tought maybe they had vication.

    I called my wife and she didn't pickup , the automated phone caller answerd for leaving a massege.

    It was like 3 hours trying to reach her.

    I went to the chicken to grab a snack before work and saw an note on the table.

    Note : Hello , My name is Unknown I got your wife and children , let me get stright to it , I want money for your family , if it wont be at my hands in about 12 hours , I will start killing your family members one by one for extra ******

    I called the police and explaind them the whole story.



    My Life Story ~~~-~~~.Part 2 :B



    The cops arrived to my house I was crying by didn't understand what to do then the police suggested me to call them so they will locate the place and find the criminal's.

    I called the criminal and tried to convince him for other ways to get my family back and cast time so the police will be able to locate them.

    While I was talking the police showed me a sign thet they located the phonecall and then they ammidiatly drove to the **********

    When they arrived it was an public phone and the police were confused , maybe he knew about it.

    Then the criminal called me and started speaking with me :



    Ring....

    Ring....

    Ring....



    .....



    *pickup*

    Me : Hello

    Unknown : Don't try cheap tricks with me like thet , one of your family members is hurt , u don't want it dead , niegther do I , just listen to what I tell you and no tricks!

    *shout*

    Me : okay , okay just calm down I will do everything you want just give me back my family please.

    Unknown : Meet me at the Central Park near the Library trash can bhind the street in about 10 minuts.

    **hangup**

    Me : wait wait! Oh Damn!

    I called the police and explaind what just happend they said they will follow me secretly til they find the criminal and catch him.

    I went with my car to the meeting place and waited for the criminal to arrive.



    My Life Story ~~~-~~~. Part 3 :C ( Final )C



    I have waited for the criminal to come and still no one on my sight.

    Suddenly , after five more minuts a big black and white mini van was driving towards me.

    It stopped at the entrance of the street.

    two black wearing outfit and masks guy's came to my way.

    I did not understand their languadge they spoke.

    One of them just took out an pistol and then I saw it coming to my face then Boom.

    I woke up at a wierd place , near me was an big ruin's.

    I didn't understand whats happening but I just saw my self hand cupped.

    I saw an broken glass on the floor and moved towards it without making any wierd noise.

    I took it with my left hand and with my full strengh tried to cut the hand cups.

    I was trying over ten minuts to cut them , when i was despard and tierd they finally been broken and my hands were ******

    There were a bounce of boxes standing on each other.

    I climbed on them and tried to pull up and watch whats around me.

    I saw three big guys standing with an ak-47 model there.

    I started to panic and think this is a terrorist plan.

    I saw two rocks and a broken bottle on the floor.

    I started thinking , they are three and I got two rocks and one broken bottle.

    I wanted to throw those stuff at them , with luck i will knock them down.

    I threw the bottle at the closest terrorist and hit his head.

    The two other man looked around and ran to my cage.

    I was hiding near the door to my cage with a rock.

    When it was open and someone entred I hit one man on the head with a rock , stole his ak and quickly shot the second guy.

    Luckly , I got out alive from all this.

    I ran to search for my family , breaking cages , throwing stuff angrly.

    I saw a cage , ran there and it was locked.

    I took the keys from the terrorists I knocked out and opend the cage.

    All my family members were there , not all of them alive.

    my two daughters were dead and my son were hurt.

    My wife was dead too buy at least I got my son.

    I cried and took my son then I started running , without knowing where I go.

    I saw strong light and ran towards it , big amount of police vehicles stood there , waiting for somthing to happen.

    They escorted me and my son and cleanded the place.



    *** five years later ***

    After all the story I had , one year after what happend to my family.

    I joined the police station , helping the law , cops , and protecting civilianz.

    My son joined high rank collage and I was working at the police station.

    Year after an year I ware ranked up every year till I reached Chieff Assistent and then at 33 years old I became the best police officer at the station , living an happy life and searching for a new wife.



    The End , Guys I know this story is really really long but invested this story alot and i really hope to join the police station , Rp kids like me should rule the server , such a good english , rp level and stories.









    OOC Part Some Questions:

    IC : In character

    OOC: out character

    MG: Mix Ooc In ic or Ic in Ooc

    PG:Utilizing the power game

    NDo not go right

    DM:Killing people for no reason just because you see them on the street

    Car DM:I intend to continue to run over people raised

    Provokingrovoke the police on faction in his role as police fire and more

    RK:To kill someone just because he killed you Although ic you do not remember it because you're starting a new life that you killed

    GTA:Take someone out without orders with nothing

    BH:Lkapoc should get to full-times faster Lkapoc

    PK:It kills you with permission to Pked then you forget everything that happened you do not know anyone starting a new life

    CK:It kills you and you get Ban It's like killing you and you died Expert and you have to open a new player like re-born





    Hope to get invested a lot in faction hours

    and Hope To be Accept
    נערך בפעם האחרונה על ידי windead : 13/11/10 ב 15:02

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    Justin_Tomy Justin_Tomy מנותק משתמש חסום
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    Mr.Blodwine ,you are Accepted to FBI Manager. Good Luck!

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